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本帖最后由 婷婷妈2005 于 2017-9-4 18:45 编辑
千帆上时不时有英语大牛现身，新概念／SBS说得头头是道，甚是佩服。今天开始把我之前写过的几篇关于指导孩子英语写作的帖子陆续发布出来，也来打瓶酱油，把坛子上的学历整整高 
非应试型，可能对原版阅读多的孩子会有点帮助。看完觉得一时无用的爸爸妈妈多多包涵，还是那句话不喜慎入。
英语写作贴之一 ---说说如何指导孩子写英语故事
write a story也是英美小学中低年级阶段的重头戏. 今天就先来说说怎样写故事里的几个小方法吧. 写作不易,要写好更需要不断地练习和高人指点. 在此抛砖引玉,欢迎各位爸爸妈妈多多指点,共同进步.
How to write a story
1. 注意斟酌句子里的用词 (对这部分感兴趣的话,以后还可以具体谈谈,词汇的内容太多太细,这里就不铺开说了)
* Precise nouns 比如: 用Siamese 而非cat
* Well-chosen adjectives 比如: rusty, smooth, cold, frail, oily等等
* Powerful verbs 比如: 使用She limped…而不是She went…
2. 保持句子的多样性
* 短句 比如: She froze.
* 长句 比如: They opened the front door and made theirway into the end room where, to their amazement, they found a small mousebrandishing a large needle.
* 问句 比如: What was it?
* 感叹句 比如: No!
* Action Sentence of three 比如: The robot glided along, began to glow green and suddenly exploded!
* Description sentence of three 比如: He wore a red cloak, yellow shoes and a ridiculous hat.
这2个是很重要的技巧，一般人我不告诉
3. 句子怎么起头
* When 例如: After eating breakfast, the hobbits began to dance.
* How 例如: Slowly, he chewed the carrot… 还可以用诸如angrily, bravely, quietly, sadly,helpfully, carefully, silently, cautiously, wearily, happily, quickly等等副词放在句首.
* Where 例如: Under the table was an old box… 也可以使用inside, outside, below, up, into, down, over,across, underneath, beside, on, in等等来开始句子
* ‘-ing ‘ starter 例如: Wondering where the key was hidden,Jack searched the room…
* ‘-ed’ starter 例如: Amazed by the juggler, Jane tried to throw the hoops into the air.
4. 在句子中增加修饰
* 形容词 例如: The old alien ate the jamsandwich…
* 副词 例如: The alien ate the sandwich eagerly…
* 比喻 例如: The alien ate the sandwich like asavage beast…
* Who 例如: The alien, who was starving, atethe sandwich…
* ‘-ing’ 例如: The alien, hoping it would soon gethome, ate the sandwich…
* ‘-ed’ 例如: The alien, frightened by the dog,ate the sandwich…
5. 句子如何收尾
* ‘-ing’ 例如: The alien grinned, hoping that the dogwas friendly.
* ‘-ed’ 例如: The alien grinned, excited by seeingthe scrap yard.
* 对说话人的动作描写 例如: “ Stop,” yelled Mr. Jenkins, pointingat the boys. |
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发表于 2016-11-23 20:20
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绝对不是所有技巧都是后面的0，没有词汇这个前面的1，完全都是拳头打在棉花上。
发表于 2016-11-23 23:21
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
